The tough guys come to jail
So they can sport their tattoos
The need to display the torso
With its intricate pointillism
Of design on the living canvas of skin.
The man, influenced by the
Tribal shamans of the orient,
Specialists in needle and ink.
The jeweled pirate and the banners
Of legion hordes
Racing from dark encampments
Into the sweat of leather
And the heat of steel
Now bringing the city the booted
Legend and the fast bike
A deployment of big pals
Weary of work
Wanting bright playthings
And shifting a sudden
Side glance of the eye
And a quick switch to a thick fist.
Now the caught quarry
Sits like a big beast
In the County Jail
The torso working
Its muscular map
Of lines and loops
While the mouth repeats the
Ancient curse of
Mother fucker, Mother fucker.
Ted Goodell
1992
We have to talk further about this one ted. I’m curious about your thoughts behind it…and the inspiration for it. Do you have tatoos? Have you been to jail? One of your more mysterious pieces.
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Hi Isabelle!
Thanks for your great comment! Dad/Ted LOVED seeing it 🙂 and he would be happy to discuss it with you sometime. As for your questions. . .
Tattoos – zero
Time in jail – 20 years. He worked there as a counselor.
Keep the comments coming!
Thanks so much,
Cousin Elianne
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Powerful and thought-provoking, I’m thinking influenced by your years with inmates in jail. I’ve alwyas been fascinated and slightly distrubed by the culture of tatoos, never understanding the psychology behind one decorating their body in such a permanent way. I particularly like the finish,with your use of the best swear word ever invented by mankind.
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Hello Anonymous! I’m guessing you are a cousin?
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment and yes, MF is one of the best, if not THE best.
Dad appreciates your thoughts and would love to hear more.
I tried to make it easier for people to comment by removing the email requirement, but now we don’t know who you are. Give us a hint!
love,
Cousin(?) El
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What a powerful poem.
Let me explain…In Cape Town South Africa we have a huge gang culture with in the jail system – with the gangs known as the ’26’s’, ’27’s’ and ’28’s’ They all use tattoos and the rituals around tattooing to show their status and hierarchy within the gangs. This poem just highlights for me how universal this gang culture is.
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Hi Jane!
Ted says thank you for your comments and that “they are astute and very meaningful” to him.
Thank you!!
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